the graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different contries.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of the population aged 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in Japan, Sweden and the USA.
Overall, the population above 65 age of three countries are increased over the period of century. Althoght the three trends are similar in terms of a general raise, the population 65 age and above is more different than Sweden and the USA.
In the 1940-1980 period, the population of 65 age and more in Sweden and the US are gradual increase at about 15%. In Sweden, the 1980s and the period from 2010s-2020s are slightly declined approximately 1% of the figure of people from above 65 age. In the other hand, the USA maintains the same level in 1980-2020.The percentage of Over 65 age American start to climb in the year 2020 up to around 25%. After the America a period of 10 years, Sweden also go up to 25% in 2040.
Over the period, the population of Japanese of 65 years old and more vary more significantly than American and Swedens. In 1940 - 1960, it was a small down. By contrast, it starts go up to 10% by the year 2030 before reach to highest line in 2040.
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- the graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different contries. 56
- The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 216, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...tion 65 age and above is more different than Sweden and the USA. In the 1940-1980 ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the figure of people from above 65 age. In the other hand, the USA maintains the s...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...A maintains the same level in 1980-2020.The percentage of Over 65 age American star...
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Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the highest'.
Suggestion: to the highest
...up to 10% by the year 2030 before reach to highest line in 2040.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44554455446 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53987587264 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49504950495 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.251917238 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 5.23603664747 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312653407194 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138566165782 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945214919055 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230075827156 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843996709473 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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