The supplied bar graph outlines the comparison of different ways of good transport over the period of 28 years in the UK.
A glance at a graph reveals that the highest ways of transport showed by rail transport, on the contrary, the lowest mode of transport was the pipeline over the span.
At the onset of 1974, about 70 millions of tons of good were transported by road, this goes steadily up and down with marginally increases over 80 million in the year around 1991, this figure then rebound in the year of 1995 and then increase dramatically up to well under 100 millions in the end of the year.As, water and rail transport had occupied approximately 40 millions of ton of goods transport but then, the former ways escalates over for years of the period and stable considerably at 60 millions of ton up to the year 1994 which again start to increase after the year 1998, while later went down over the 17 years period reaching around 22 millions of ton. AS the last transport system that was pipeline had about 2 millions of tons of good transport at the start which marginally rise considerably above 20 million in 1996 and it maintained its figure till the last period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '70 million'.
Suggestion: 70 million
... the span. At the onset of 1974, about 70 millions of tons of good were transported by road, ...
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Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...der 100 millions in the end of the year.As, water and rail transport had occupied ...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '40 million'.
Suggestion: 40 million
...il transport had occupied approximately 40 millions of ton of goods transport but then, the fo...
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Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '60 million'.
Suggestion: 60 million
...f the period and stable considerably at 60 millions of ton up to the year 1994 which again sta...
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Line 3, column 648, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '22 million'.
Suggestion: 22 million
...ver the 17 years period reaching around 22 millions of ton. AS the last transport system that ...
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Line 3, column 725, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '2 million'.
Suggestion: 2 million
...port system that was pipeline had about 2 millions of tons of good transport at the start whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5971563981 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52358876569 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521327014218 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 22.4926829268 231% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 218.726284429 43.030603864 508% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 242.5 112.824112599 215% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.75 22.9334400587 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.75 5.23603664747 224% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222846196589 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193016855516 0.103423049105 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089526960079 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224423589002 0.15604864568 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808911455934 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.6 13.2329268293 201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.08 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.0 10.3012195122 194% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.29 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.9970731707 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.