The above-mentioned line graph represents the quantities of goods measured in million tonnes transported in the U.K during the period from 1974 to 2002 by an availability of various modes of transport specifically road, water , rail and pipeline. I will explained the comparisons of given data in the upcoming paragraphs.
Firstly, from 1974 to 1994, maximum 20 million tonnes of products were transporting by pipeline and approximately 30 and 59 million tonnes goods had transferred through rail and water facility. The road used to transported estimated 79 million tonnes goods in U.K country.
Secondly, by 1994 to 2002 , the road facility was used to transporting 99 million tonnes and water and rail alternatives were utilizing to transferred 62 and 41 million tonnes goods to U.K. Beside it, more than 20 million tonnes transported by pipeline.
In the conclusion, it seems to me that road was the popular mode of transport by which maximum quantity of goods transported as compared to other modes of transport including water, rail and pipeline facilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31176470588 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10673542963 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.4015008809 43.030603864 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.5 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290090221578 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167027742295 0.103423049105 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110650596438 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213773232607 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760720670102 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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