The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
As seen from the graph, road has always been the most popular mode of transportation of goods since 1974 to 2002. Use of road has decreased at two points over the years, but nevertheless maintained its upward nature. In 2002 the goods transported by road is still the highest, about a 100 Million tonnes.
Goods transported by water was somewhat steady from 1974 to 1978, after which there was a substantial increase over the time of 1978 to 1982. After that the amount of goods transported was steady for about 10-12 years. It decreased slowly from 1994 but had a steep growth after that till 2002.
Goods transported by rail was similar to water till 1978, followed by a frequent fall and rise over the years. In 2002, the amount of goods transported by rail became almost the same as it was in 1974, around 40 Million tonnes. The curve for rail is a little irregular.
Use of pipeline is the least among the four modes of transportation. In 1974 about 5 Million tonnes of goods were transported using pipelines. It was almost steady until 1978, after which it increased. Then a little before 1982 the increases stopped and again the amount of goods increased in a very slow rate. There was an increase in it for about 4 years. Then the amount was the same till 2002.
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 67
- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Other, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. 67
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. 61
- Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computers is now replacing their functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroleectric power plant. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: BUT_NEVERTHELESS[1]
Message: Use simply 'but'.
Suggestion: but
...decreased at two points over the years, but nevertheless maintained its upward nature. In 2002 t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, nevertheless, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63596491228 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48703548244 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486842105263 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6981855039 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4666666667 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262773791987 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101473124518 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923472967186 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183353772478 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428053276854 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.32 8.06136585366 78% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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