Given are the two layouts comparing a typical office in Japan and America.
Perceptibly, the office setups in Japan and America are diametrically different. With a communal work environment for subordinates and supervisors is preferred in the Japanese culture for the former and simplicity is reflected in the American style which emphasizes more private space for both office clerks and managerial staff.
In Japan, tables of members in the same team are placed together to facilitate group discussions, forming two large areas, each of which is overseen by the section manager on one end. Heading north, the working station of the Japanese department manager directly faces the shared space, offering an overall view to monitoring all the activities in the office. In the same north, there is only one window in this structure, meanwhile, the American office enjoys two windows on either side which are east and west.
Regarding the American office, the working spaces of the management team including two section managers and one department manager are located separately with partitions on the East side of the American office. The middle of the room, there is divided into 8 separate cubicles with high walls to minimize distractions. While space on the west side of the office in America is equipped with a printer copier and storage, there are no such facilities in the Japanese office. Furthermore, on the western side, there are two conference rooms to discuss as well as meet together or avoid disturbance.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the two layouts comparing a typical off...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 246.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17886178862 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7675016479 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552845528455 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 283.868780488 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1398155812 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.4 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0982653492745 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424258270578 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324868625627 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716492212622 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209734835964 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 40.7170731707 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the two layouts comparing a typical off...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 246.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17886178862 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7675016479 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552845528455 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 283.868780488 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1398155812 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.4 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0982653492745 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424258270578 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324868625627 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716492212622 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209734835964 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 40.7170731707 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.