Opinion diverges on whether the elder citizen is good for business, the economy and society. Although this sentiment can be justified to some certain extent, I am in opposition owing to some rational reasons.
Admittedly, some hypotheses argue that an aging population is not a good phenomenon. First, aging represents the accumulation of changes in a human being over time and can encompass physical, psychological, and social changes that appear in some services or demand such as health care. This can be explained by the fact that number of Japanese seniors high, which in turn many services used, and the nurse is become the high paid job for healthcare services, when the appearance of develop the medical area of Japan that the young labors from Vietnam or some countries who ready to work for the high salary. Hence, health care services are represented the high level of demand and gotten huge revenues. Second, number of seniors high and lots of people have stable income. The reason is the supply is greater than the demand, so the price is lower than the value Hence, the number of aging people can help tos promote development of economy.
Conversely, I ascertain my strong support for the reason that the aging population is not a good phenomenon. Perceptibly, the phenomenon of imbalance happens in the workforce. To be more accurate, the young distribute manual work for getting heavy work as the factor of technology when it need to be updated daily. Further and even more prominently, aging people causes reducing FDI or foreign direct investment proportions. If the foreigner investors leave the country together, this leads to a slumping down the rate of payment and work efficiency. This suggests that countries need to give policy. Countries lose a huge amount of investment which is caused by aging people.
In conclusion, the aging population brings somes benefits for a country such as huge revenues or promoting the development of the economy. The bad thing as my hypothesis contains reducing FDI rate and imbalanced phenomenon in the workforce.
- Some people work for the same organization all their working life Others think that it is better to work for different organizations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
- The graph below shows a typical American and a Japanese office Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- The diagram shows how ketchup is made 78
- The diagram shows how instant noodles are manufactured Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 343, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ined by the fact that number of Japanese seniors high, which in turn many service...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, hence, if, second, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06725146199 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75413297655 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540935672515 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5744124497 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.941176471 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147834780729 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538791835735 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649491034481 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956191663376 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173900176409 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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