Given is the line graph depicting the rate of citizens all over the world approaching news from 4 means of media, namely Television, Newspaper, Radio, and Internet over a course of time, commencing from 1995 to 2020 and giving predictions for the next 5 years.
Perceptibly, the proportion of people collecting news via these sources seemingly shares a similar downswing over the mentioned years, except for that of Internet.
From 1995 to 2020, TV was by far the most reachable source by people around the world despite a modest drop from 70% in 1995 to 55% in the next 25 years. Likewise, new-takers using Newspaper and Radio both witnessed a diminution in rate, specifically plummeting by a half and almost 30% in 2020 compared to 58% and 51%in the year 1995. In addition, before 2000, Internet was not used widely among netizens; however, in the next 20 years, the percentage of Internet users surged to 40% and overtaken that of the two counterparts Press and Radio.
When it comes to the predictions to 2025, the rate of people gaining news via Internet is projected to surpass the other categories and make up 67%. Meanwhile, TV, Newspaper and Radio are likely to become less common for people to access, especially Newspaper and Radio, with merely 20% and 30% worldwide citizens using respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, so, while, except for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92760180995 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73059584 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601809954751 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.9478079715 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.571428571 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5714285714 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227328778493 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093735533826 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585399142316 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131020554508 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254000924075 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.2329268293 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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