The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions measured in millions of tonnes from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007

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The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007.

The line charts illustrate the emissions of UK acid rain from four different sectors namely transport and education, electricity, gas and water supply, and domestic and other industries from 1990 to 2007.

Overall, it can be seen that most of the four sectors witnessed a dramatically decreased while transport and education had a partial growth in 17 years starting from 1990

In 1990, electricity gas and water supply by far the highest tones at around 3,5 million tonnes while domestic only contribution the lowest point at over 0,5 million tonnes. After 6 years, we witnessed a sharp decline in 4 sectors, surprisingly the figures for electricity, gas, and supply and others industries decreased nearly twofold to 1,5 billion. Moreover, the figures for domestic and transport and communication are quite similar at nearly 1 million tonnes in 1997.

By 2003, it is noticeable that the percentage of Uk acid rains emission in other industries, electricity, gas, and water supply and domestic reached the lowest point at under 1,5 million tones, 0,5 billion tones and under 0,5 billion tones respectively. In contrast, while 3 out of 4 sectors also go down gradually, transport and communication had the opposite changes, which reach a peak at 1 million tonnes in 2005.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al growth in 17 years starting from 1990 In 1990, electricity gas and water suppl...
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...owest point at over 0,5 million tonnes. After 6 years, we witnessed a sharp decl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18357487923 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.896553257 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.3212111193 43.030603864 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.833333333 112.824112599 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5 22.9334400587 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26316016524 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134351326153 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113069032588 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180492603323 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107074646523 0.0819641961636 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.2329268293 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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