The line graph reveals the information about the unemployment percentages in the United States and Japan between 1993 to march 1999. As an overview, the highest unemployed rates were shown in United State.
In detail, in 1993 the people who were unemployed notice as 2.5% in Japan. Which further showed a increasement and reached to almost 4.4% in march 1996. However, a dip of 1 percent observed in the next year. Afterwards, this percentage rose to 5% in the latter year.
Moving towards the United state, unemployment was recorded as 7% in the former year, whereas in the next year this rate showed a slight down to 5.5% in march 1995. Further, this rate was observed some fluctuations in all the next years and reached to nearly 5.1% in the 1999.
To sum up, there were a lot of fluctuations noticed in the unemployment rate of America, wheareas, japan was followed a increasing pattern in throughout the year.
- The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture the bricks for building industry 61
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- Interviews form the basic selection criteria for most large. However, some people think that interviews is not a reliable method of choosing whom to employ and there are other methods to what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- A crime related news are detailed covered in newspaper and telivision Some people say that there should be government interception To what extent do you agree or disagree 91
- Some people think that in the modern world we have become more depend on each other while other think that people are now become self-dependent. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, whereas, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84810126582 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72795823444 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563291139241 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.933550488 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1111111111 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239931159713 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105191320407 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907748772811 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155338546496 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834598515338 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.