The line graph illustrates the percentage of unemployment rate in the USA and Japan. Report is taken into consideration from the month of march 1993 to march 1999.
In the year 19993, the unemployment rate of the USA is picked accounting 7 percent. USA try to plunged the employment rate in the subsequent year. As the time rise in the USA the unemployment rate gradually decrease. In the year 1999 the rate of unemployment lowered than Japan amounting 4.2 percent of the total. In 7 years they improved there rate of unemployment by 2.8%.
However, in the Japan the rate of unemployment rate is reversed. In the year 1993 Japan has marginal share of unemployment with 2%. Over the period of time the unemployment rate rise to reach its maximum in the year 1999. The rate of percentage rise to 4.5% of the total. From the year 1998 to 1999 the unemployment rate climbed from 3.5% to 4.5%.
To conclude, the unemployment rate was higher in USA than Japan and over the period of time the result is reversed. The rate of percentage of the USA and Japan also become equal in the middle of 1998 and 1999 accounting 4.4%
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 88, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (USA) must be used with a third-person verb: 'tries'.
Suggestion: tries
...USA is picked accounting 7 percent. USA try to plunged the employment rate in the s...
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Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...employment rate in the subsequent year. As the time rise in the USA the unemployme...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...share of unemployment with 2%. Over the period of time the unemployment rate rise to reach its...
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Line 4, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...climbed from 3.5% to 4.5%. To conclude, the unemployment rate was higher in USA ...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...s higher in USA than Japan and over the period of time the result is reversed. The rate of per...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74525044395 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.395 0.547539520022 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.3176339707 43.030603864 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.5714285714 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.2857142857 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.21428571429 5.23603664747 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.13902439024 790% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253633589158 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118869043335 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558004771174 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198614086878 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802257301999 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.2329268293 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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