The bar chart illustrates the climb in the population from the year 1970 to 2010. Report was taken from world's top five metro cities including urban and rural areas.
In the year 1970, Tokyo had largest number of population than its compatriots. Followed by New York, Shanghai, Bombay and least figure of Jakarta accounting 14, 11, 5 and 3 receptively. Where as the ratio was enhance for Tokyo, Bombay, Jakarta with 24, 13 and 9. New York and Shanghai describe marginal growth in the time period of 20 years.
However, in the year 2010 there was dramatically change appears. The report suggest in the span of 20 years Bombay and Jakarta population doubled in 2010 than of 1990. Shanghai population reflects gradual rise to be ranked third among five cities.
To conclude, Bombay and Tokyo projected almost equivalent rate of population in the year 2010. New York population rise little-by-little and became least populated country in the year 2010. Bombay reported most crowded cities in 40 years.
- The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of major university in 2012. 61
- A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons 56
- The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 61
- The charts below show the growth in the population in some of the world’s largest cities as well as the population distribution in urban and rural areas.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where r 78
- Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 25, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the largest'.
Suggestion: had the largest
...d rural areas. In the year 1970, Tokyo had largest number of population than its compatrio...
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Line 2, column 186, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
...accounting 14, 11, 5 and 3 receptively. Where as the ratio was enhance for Tokyo, Bombay...
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Line 2, column 209, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enhanced'.
Suggestion: enhanced
...d 3 receptively. Where as the ratio was enhance for Tokyo, Bombay, Jakarta with 24, 13 ...
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Line 4, column 141, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'became the least'.
Suggestion: became the least
...rk population rise little-by-little and became least populated country in the year 2010. Bom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99401197605 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63407721895 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604790419162 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.3376352661 43.030603864 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.5 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9166666667 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 5.23603664747 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187898427236 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731485529418 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525355167547 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128440306282 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572266540279 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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