The graph below shows usual water uses in millions of cubic metres by industries in some countries in a year
The given bar graph Depicts regarding information about consumption of normal water in companies in some nation in the year.
It can be observed that the uses of groundwater and public supply water in Fuel Industries are 17 and 10 in millions of cubic metres respectively. necessary need industries the consumption of Government water is 80 cubic metres more as compared to the groundwater.
Explaining rest of the information ,100 million of cubic metres public supply water to the machine related Industries.the public supply 90 millions of cubic metres in metal and three time more supply of groundwater. The usage of groundwater in chemical related companies are 4:30 millions of cubic metre the utilise of government water in paper industries 20 million of cubic metres and in textile are half of paper industries.
Overall it is Lucid that,mostly ground water used by companies rather than public water.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Necessary
... millions of cubic metres respectively. necessary need industries the consumption of Gove...
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Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...overnment water is 80 cubic metres more as compared to the groundwater. Explain...
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Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r. Explaining rest of the information ,100 million of cubic metres public suppl...
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Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '90 million'.
Suggestion: 90 million
...ne related Industries.the public supply 90 millions of cubic metres in metal and three time mo...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '30 million'.
Suggestion: 30 million
...ter in chemical related companies are 4:30 millions of cubic metre the utilise of government w...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...panies are 4:30 millions of cubic metre the utilise of government water in paper industries...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , mostly
...er industries. Overall it is Lucid that,mostly ground water used by companies rather t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2380952381 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94478473547 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517006802721 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5584435779 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.333333333 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391599363849 0.215688989381 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201158160627 0.103423049105 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479158943047 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22102864095 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715938371525 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.