The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The given flowchart describes how bricks are made and delivered for the building industry.
Overall each and every that is mandatory. Emission of one step will hurt whole the process.
Firstly, the digger machine dig up clay and and the excavated play is put on the metal grid to be filtered then goes to the roller machine where the sand and water mixed up with it. The mixture can be put in mould and wirecutter to make the shape of bricks. In the fourth stage, the shape bricks kept in the drying oven to avoid moisture and it take 24 to 48 hours.
After that the bricks are shifted into the klins to to heat up with moderate 200 Celsius to high up to 1300 Celsius temperature and the final placed in the cooling chamber for 48 to 72 2 hours. After the cooled brakes placed in a pallet fore packaging and loaded in lorry for delivery.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...Firstly, the digger machine dig up clay and and the excavated play is put on the metal ...
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Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it. The mixture can be put in mould and wirecutter to make the shape of bricks. ...
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Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
...he drying oven to avoid moisture and it take 24 to 48 hours. After that the bricks ...
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Line 4, column 50, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...t the bricks are shifted into the klins to to heat up with moderate 200 Celsius to hi...
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Line 4, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hours. After the cooled brakes placed in a pallet fore packaging and loaded in lo...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35668789809 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18284631739 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617834394904 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.4116816654 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107947879236 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043590758444 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336278124975 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658482647272 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343520311619 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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