The provided line graph depict about the passengers movement on the Toronto metro system, in July 2017.
Overall, the most of the passengers travelled in in morning hours and as well as in the evening hours.
Having a quick glance on the line graph it reveals that early in the morning hundred thousand people travelled and number rose up significantly till the four hundred thousand at 8 o'clock. However, the number dropped sharply on 200 thousand at 10 o'clock. After that, from 11 o'clock to 4 o'clock the number was no more than three hundred thousand.
Looking at the remaining data, the number gained the almost similar amount as in the morning in the evening hours, paradoxically the number fell down again on 150 thousand. And, it remained almost on 150 lakh despite having some fluctuations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'passengers'' or 'passenger's'?
Suggestion: passengers'; passenger's
...he provided line graph depict about the passengers movement on the Toronto metro system, ...
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Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rs movement on the Toronto metro system, in July 2017. Overall, the most of t...
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Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...metro system, in July 2017. Overall, the most of the passengers travelled in ...
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Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
..., the most of the passengers travelled in in morning hours and as well as in the eve...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...tly till the four hundred thousand at 8 oclock. However, the number dropped sharply on...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...r dropped sharply on 200 thousand at 10 oclock. After that, from 11 oclock to 4 ocloc...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n 200 thousand at 10 oclock. After that, from 11 oclock to 4 oclock the number wa...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...sand at 10 oclock. After that, from 11 oclock to 4 oclock the number was no more than...
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Suggestion: o'clock
...clock. After that, from 11 oclock to 4 oclock the number was no more than three hundr...
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Line 7, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...usand. Looking at the remaining data, the number gained the almost similar amo...
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Line 7, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er fell down again on 150 thousand. And, it remained almost on 150 lakh despite ...
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Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...50 thousand. And, it remained almost on 150 lakh despite having some fluctuation...
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Line 7, column 208, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'lakh' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'lakhs'.
Suggestion: lakhs
...usand. And, it remained almost on 150 lakh despite having some fluctuations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 671.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 136.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93382352941 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53179393639 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610294117647 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 193.5 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4131806139 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8571428571 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0773393350858 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457176518137 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750635641401 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729906482714 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886503659081 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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