The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words

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The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

The given bar chart illustrates the changes of five age groups of Iceland under the 30-year time period from 1990 to 2020. Overall, the percentage of people aged 25-54 years old was higher than any other age groups, while the feature for the 15-24 age group was the lowest at the end of the given period.

First and foremost, there were over 30% of people aged 25-54 in Iceland in 1990. This data steadily increased overtime and reached the peak in 2020, with the ratio of nearly a half. Not following the same trend, the number of young Icelanders under 24 years old tended to decrease over the years. Starting from around. 20% in 1990, the proportion of people aged 15-24 dropped to approximately 10% in 2020. The same trend could be witnessed with the youngest group in Iceland when the percentage fell from nearly a quarter to 18% at the end.

However, the number of the elderly in Iceland had a marginal fluctuation through the period. People at the age of 55-64 accounted for nearly 13% in 1990 and slightly decreased to 10% in 2020. In these 30 years, the figure for people who were over 65 years old remained stable, which accounted for around one-ninth of the whole population in Iceland.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66197183099 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30984007015 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549295774648 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3329121395 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2727272727 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150056658329 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622528606486 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378486312565 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110795205884 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0101042238212 0.0819641961636 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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