The graph illustrates the figures for science qualifications of Singapore and Malaysia. Generally, the number of Master’s degrees and Bachelor’s degrees are less than others and citizens of Singapore have higher education than people of Malaysia.
With Master level, the percentage of 2 countries is the same with approximately 3%. However, with a Bachelor's degree, Singapore has a higher figure for 20%, twice as much as Malaysia.
Turning to school leaving exams and no qualification in science, Malaysia’s statistics is higher than Singapore’s in both. With school leaving exams, the percentage of Malaysia is 35% while the number of Singapore is 30%, lower than Malaysia 5%. A similar trend can be seen in no qualification in science, the figure for Malaysia is 65% while the number for Singapore is 60%. Besides that, Singapore’s percentage of no qualification is twice as much as school leaving exams with 60% and 30%, Malaysia has the same trend, either.
The graph illustrates the figures for science qualifications of Singapore and Malaysia. Generally, the number of Master’s degrees and Bachelor’s degrees are less than others and citizens of Singapore have higher education than people of Malaysia.
With Master level, the percentage of 2 countries is the same with approximately 3%. However, with a Bachelor's degree, Singapore has a higher figure for 20%, twice as much as Malaysia.
Turning to school leaving exams and no qualification in science, Malaysia’s statistics is higher than Singapore’s in both. With school leaving exams, the percentage of Malaysia is 35% while the number of Singapore is 30%, lower than Malaysia 5%. A similar trend can be seen in no qualification in science, the figure for Malaysia is 65% while the number for Singapore is 60%. Besides that, Singapore’s percentage of no qualification is twice as much as school leaving exams with 60% and 30%, Malaysia has the same trend, either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32258064516 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11052056566 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496774193548 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9258240357 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.125 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.627250476741 0.215688989381 291% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.30508485792 0.103423049105 295% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.188590259287 0.0843802449381 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.50059664563 0.15604864568 321% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.287546118868 0.0819641961636 351% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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