The graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany France Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005

Essay topics:

The graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.

The presented line graph elucidates how much money was paid for books in four different countries – Germany, France, Italy, Austria for 10 years period from 1995 to 2005.

Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that there was an upward trend in the total amount of money used for purchasing books in all four nations. Another fascinating point is that Germany had its citizens spending the largest amount of money for this purpose over the span of a decade.

At the start, 80 million dollars was spent on books in Germany, leading all other regions. Meanwhile, the figure stood at about 57 millions, 50 millions, 30 millions in France, Italy, Austria respectively. Since then, all expenses of money buying books in four nations growth, with the most significant increased being seen in Germany and Austria ( intersected Italy during 2003).

Around 2001, the amount of money dedicated to books in Austria began to rise, eventually overtaking that in Italy by 2003, but the comparable amount in Germany fell before rising again around the same time. By 2005, the figure for the money that paid for books had increased to over 95 million dollars, making Germany become the region had the largest figure. Nevertheless, the spending on books in France, Italy, Austria were only contributed around 72, 71 and 61 millions in turn.

Votes
Average: 7 (1 vote)

Comments

Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 15
No. of Words: 223 350
No. of Characters: 1083 1500
No. of Different Words: 126 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.864 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.857 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.395 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 78 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 54 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 28 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.778 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.808 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.465 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.692 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.087 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5