The pie chart delineates details about how the world’s water is distributed, whereas the bar chart presented elucidates the proportion of water usage in agriculture, domestic, and industry in three different countries (Egypt, Saudi Arabia, Industry).
Looking for an overall perspective, The vast bulk of the world's water is made up of salt water. The majority of fresh water comes from ice and glaciers. While agriculture is the predominant use of water in Egypt and Saudi Arabia, industry is the primary use of water in Canada.
Two pie charts illustrate that 97% of worldwide water is salt water as opposed to a mere 3% which is fresh water. Water from ice and glaciers accounts for 79% of all fresh water compared to ground water and surface water (20% and 1% respectively).
Looking at the bar chart which indicates terms of the use of water, it is clear that both Egypt and Saudia Arabia use almost 80% of their water for agriculture in comparison to domestic and industry which contributed to approximately 15% and 10% in turn. The opposite is seen in Canada where only about 10% of water is used for agriculture and domestic purposes in contrast to industry, which consumes 80% of Canada’s water.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, whereas, while, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93170731707 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73208185586 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526829268293 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6328560096 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.375 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319680754974 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160894826197 0.103423049105 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898572030857 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227691344674 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077365868897 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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