The line graph reveals how much money in $ US dollars (millions) people in Germany, France, Italy, and Austria spent on buying the books between 1995 to 2005.
It can be clearly seen that people in Germany is more enjoyable in buying books than other. Where the total purchases of books on the year of 2005 reached 90 million dollars, while on 1995 has recorded about 80 million dollars. Also, the amount of spending money here was increased on 1999 then decreased on 2001 and then backed to increase at the end of period. France came in the second level of total purchases achieved about 75 million dollars on 2005, where the total amount of money increased gradually to the end of comparison period. Italy came thirdly to achieve amount of 62 million dollars. However, Austria came lastly with amount of 30 million dollars in the beginning, it came in the third level on the end of 2005.
Overall, the amount of money bought books increased in all countries are Germany, France, Italy and Austria over the 10 year- period. people in Germany spent a big amount of their money to buy books higher than others who in France, Italy, and Austria.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: People
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, lastly, second, so, then, third, thirdly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70646766169 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21866143936 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517412935323 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6190128606 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.111111111 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407659215985 0.215688989381 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175328418199 0.103423049105 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133525192722 0.0843802449381 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.343821117667 0.15604864568 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120917688087 0.0819641961636 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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