There is no doubt the popular sports are very important. While some people believe football World’s Cup and Olympics are essential for dissolve international tension and world peace, others they don’t agree with that. In this assay I will discuss both sides the argument and explain my support for the later view.
One of the most significant benefits of the sport special football it’s make people happy, also contribute release the patriotic feeling through encouragement their teams. In addition to, the international events like Olympic play important role in giving peace between countries. A very good example can be clearly seen in the participation of North Korea in the Winter Olympics recently held in South Korea, even though both countries have been in conflict for some time. Evidently, the international event can able to dissolve political conflict between countries.
However, football matches have many drawbacks in the last international event recently, World Cup Russia 2018 for example, the loser teams like Egyptian team don’t get of any point and defeated in every watch who played. There is make people in Egypt feeling pity, angry and sad. In contrast, Russia's team has presented incredible matches each player of the eleven made his best efforts which, make the Russian happy and excited.
For another view, the international sports have indirect effect on the income generally, on economic, at 2020 the World's Cup will be happening in Qatar. This event need to many constructions, because that several companies have opened up business in the country and there has been a boom in the construction and infrastructural development as the government builds stadiums and develops locations for the event to hold
In conclusion, the international sports events is very important at several levels income, relationships between countries and world peace that paving the road to make people happiest. In my opinion, the benefits of international sports are outweighed by their drawbacks, i would prefer to set up more and more events
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36391437309 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85425149257 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593272171254 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.8376871034 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.923076923 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1538461538 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264043201668 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879229591118 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066653666759 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145302213102 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509621873842 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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