The given line graph compares how much sweetener in pound is available in the United States between 1966 and 2012. Overall, it is conspicuous that the availability of sweeteners fluctuated throughout the whole time frame.
In detail, the trends of refined cane and beet sugars and corn sweeteners were diametrically opposed. The refine cane and beet sugars began at 100 pounds per person in 1966, which was approximately fivefold the amount of the rest of the three sweeteners. Since then, there had been a drop of 40 pounds in the amount of the refined cane and beet sugars before it leveled off at around 60 pounds from 1986 to 2012. It ended it period lower than where it began. In contrast to the downward trend of refined cane, the availability of corn sweeteners experienced a constant increase in the first two decades, with its figure rising from 20 pounds to 60 pounds per person. However, it exceeded the amount of refined cane in 1986, and then continued its growth before reaching its peak of about 80 pounds per person in 1998. Afterwards, a slight decline occurred in the availability of corn sweeteners between 1998 and 2012, with a marginal drop of about 20 pounds.
In comparison with sugars and corn sweeteners, the amount of honey and edible syrups remained unchanged within the timespan of the twenty years, starting at 15 pounds per person and ending with the same level where they began.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 102, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... sweeteners were diametrically opposed. The refine cane and beet sugars began at 100 pound...
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Line 3, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...a marginal drop of about 20 pounds. In comparison with sugars and corn sweeteners, the am...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, then, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 242.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84297520661 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57611405733 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537190082645 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7951804897 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.2 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174501801692 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841501450155 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856938784243 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140781663962 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122483368798 0.0819641961636 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.