The line graph represents the information about the yearly income of Bernie’s Buns;Lovely Loaves;Robbie’s Bakery from 2000 to 2010.
Overall,Lovely Loaves and Robbie’s Bakery income increased noticeably while Bernie's Buns income saw a dramatic decrease over the period shown.It is clear that Robbie’s Bakery got the lowest earnings in three bakeries.
In 2000,Bernie’s Buns had the biggest income about 80.000 pound sterling while Lovely Loaves just had about 55.000 pounds.At the same time the income of Robbie’s Bakery was 20.000 pounds.From 2000 to 2005,the income of Bernie’s Buns fell unexpectedly about 60.000 pounds while Robbie’s Bakery grow rapidly to 38.000 pounds.At that time,the Lovely Loaves income were unchanged about 55.000 pounds.
In 2006,the earning of Bernie’s Buns and Lovely Loaves were almost the same.From 2006 toward,Lovely Loaves earning continue to go up until reaching the peak in 2010 about 101.000 pounds.Wheres the figure for the earning of Bernie’s Buns go down considerably to 40.000 pounds.During the same period,the Robbie’s Bakery earning saw an substantial increased about 65.000 pounds
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , Lovely
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Suggestion: At
...ely Loaves just had about 55.000 pounds.At the same time the income of Robbie&apos...
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Suggestion: From
... Robbie's Bakery was 20.000 pounds.From 2000 to 2005,the income of Bernie'...
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Suggestion: At
...;s Bakery grow rapidly to 38.000 pounds.At that time,the Lovely Loaves income were...
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...ow rapidly to 38.000 pounds.At that time,the Lovely Loaves income were unchanged abo...
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Suggestion: From
... and Lovely Loaves were almost the same.From 2006 toward,Lovely Loaves earning conti...
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...es were almost the same.From 2006 toward,Lovely Loaves earning continue to go up until ...
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Suggestion: During
...s go down considerably to 40.000 pounds.During the same period,the Robbie's Baker...
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Suggestion: , the
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...od,the Robbie's Bakery earning saw an substantial increased about 65.000 poun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.05357142857 4.92477711251 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41825809129 2.65546596893 129% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559523809524 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.803284223 43.030603864 264% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 254.25 112.824112599 225% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.0 22.9334400587 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 5.23603664747 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127732659692 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106135008502 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400768143899 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106135008502 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400768143899 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.1 13.2329268293 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 61.2550243902 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 10.3012195122 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.7 11.4140731707 164% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.