The graph shows data about the average Saturday sales of two bakeries in London in 2010
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates information on the average number of items sold on Saturday in two typical bakeshops in London named Lovely Loaves and Bernies’s Buns in 2010.
Overall, the Bernie’s Bun bakery was generally more successful than the Lovely Loaves on a surveyed Saturday. As observed, doughnuts were the best-selling product in both bakeries. Specifically, salads were the least popular in Bernie's buns whereas, in Lovely Loaves, toasted sandwiches were not as popular as others.
In terms of Bernie’s Bun, doughnuts were by far the most popular item, about 135 species were sold. The second best-selling snack in this bakery was cookies, about 15 pieces lower than doughnuts. Looking at rolls, which were not sold as much as cakes, were about 15 pieces lower. Additionally, chips were bought almost as much as cookies, at nearly 73 pieces and 75 pieces. By contrast, Salads were less common than toasted sandwiches overall, about 12 sold-out items lower.
Regarding the Lovely Loaves, cookies sold were not quite as much as cakes, compared to 70 pieces and 75 pieces. As can be seen, rolls and fresh loaves are almost as popular as chips, which were nearly 40 snacks. While salads were the fourth best-selling products, with 63 sold-out pieces, toasted sandwiches were significantly sold 20 snacks lower.
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- The graph shows data about the average Saturday sales of two bakeries in London in 2010 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The graph shows data about the average Saturday sales of two bakeries in London in 2010 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The graph shows data about the average Saturday sales of two bakeries in London in 2010 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, second, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21962616822 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6527284622 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546728971963 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8999141998 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0833333333 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0691219588713 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328105833401 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497541204013 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650134021324 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679091989974 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.