The graph shows data about the average Saturday sales of two bakeries in London in 2010 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph shows data about the average Saturday sales of two bakeries in London in 2010
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart presents data on the average sales of various items on Saturdays in two typical bakeries in London, Lovely Loaves and Bernie's Buns, in 2010.

In general, Bernie's Buns bakery had higher sales compared to Lovely Loaves on the surveyed Saturday. Doughnuts were the top-selling item in both bakeries. However, salads were less popular at Bernie's Buns, while toasted sandwiches were not as popular at Lovely Loaves.

At Bernie's Buns, doughnuts were the most popular item, with approximately 135 units sold. The second best-selling item was cookies, which sold about 15 units less than doughnuts. Rolls had slightly lower sales compared to cakes, with a difference of about 15 units. Chips were almost as popular as cookies, with sales of around 73 and 75 units respectively. Salads were less popular than toasted sandwiches, with a difference of about 12 units.

At Lovely Loaves, the number of cookies sold was slightly lower than the number of cakes, with 70 and 75 units respectively. Rolls and fresh loaves were almost as popular as chips, with sales of around 40 units. Salads were the fourth best-selling item, with 63 units sold, while toasted sandwiches had significantly lower sales, with 20 fewer units sold.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'lowed', 'lowered'.
Suggestion: lowed; lowered
...less than doughnuts. Rolls had slightly lower sales compared to cakes, with a differe...
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Line 7, column 318, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'lowed', 'lowered'.
Suggestion: lowed; lowered
...le toasted sandwiches had significantly lower sales, with 20 fewer units sold.
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13366336634 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54675425966 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470297029703 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 3.36585365854 357% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8311334502 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4166666667 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0929501779418 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047096087459 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718351215921 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944506971991 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978822540115 0.0819641961636 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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