The graph shows data for annual sales revenue or turnover for three outdoor clothing companies from 2004 and 2014.
The graph given illustrates the information in term of earning three outdoor clothing companies, namely Bradly Wear Ski and Snow Wear and Hiking Kit which were sold over the course of 10 years from 2004 to 2014.
Overall, the Hiking Kit company had an upward trend in clothing income whereas there was an opposite pattern in the other cor.
In 2004, The revenue of Bradly Outdoor Wear topped out at 3 million while this figure for the Ski and Snow Wear company saw a lower rate by million. At this time, just only 1,5 million of the Hiking Fit clothes' company reached the lowest point in the yearly turnover.
During a decade, the revenue of selling clothes of clothing the Hiking Kit company showed a rocket until the year 2014 witnessed a peak at 3,5 million. Meanwhile, the opposite was true for both the Bradly and Ski and Snow. It decreased considerably after fluctuating slightly, 2,7 million with Bradly and 0,8 million with Ski and Snow, respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76646706587 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37612154609 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59880239521 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4125226137 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.714285714 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240916835482 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107657072858 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683711655004 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138590469349 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476264349712 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.