The graph shows data on the manufacture of passenger cars in 2015

Essay topics:

The graph shows data on the manufacture of passenger cars in 2015.

The pie chart depicts the production of passenger cars globally in 2015.

Overall, It is notable that Europe and Great China made up the largest segment of the chart. On the contrary, South America, South Asia and Middle East/ Africa were accounted the smallest portion. Furthermore, North America and Country of Japan/ Korea has a significant figure of car manufacturer too.

Looking in more detail, the main producer of passenger car worldwide are located in Greater China and Europe; which is made up half of the total percentage, accounted 26% and 25% respectively. Moreover, some of the cars also created in Japan/Korea and North America too, comprise 19% in North America, 3% lower the Asian countries.

On the other hand, manufacturing cars are not popular in South Asia (8%) as well as South America who got half of the percentage of South Asia. In addition, Middle East/ Africa is the least places that produce car accounted only 2%.

Votes
Average: 7.5 (38 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, well, in addition, as well as, on the contrary, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03797468354 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65931261772 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613924050633 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4792321054 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 5.23603664747 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175755324008 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835072095108 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766028496683 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130987988626 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719006630395 0.0819641961636 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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