Supermarkets should only sell food produced from within their own country rather than imports from overseas What are your opinions on this

Essay topics:

Supermarkets should only sell food produced from within their own country rather than imports from overseas.
What are your opinions on this?

It is thought that selling foods produced by the locals should patronize instead of receiving goods from the other country. In my opinion, I believe that supporting locally owned product have more merits than demerits especially by employment and economic growth.

To begin with the positive view, selling local cuisine in the supermarket will produce job opportunities for the citizen. Due to build up of product demand, the company will hire more workers. Obviously, employment is good indicator of productivity and well being. Moreover, people of the community are secured that the food they will eat are safe, nutritious and with good quality, by means of providing trusted quality inspector that will closely monitor every product. One of the local businessmen in community builds a poultry farm, he employed almost 100 employees to help establish and run the farm. Owing to this, he gave permanent source of income to the people that will provide in their families daily needs. This is one benefits of manufacturing food or product from own land, and not relying to other country.

On the other hand, another merits of supporting local cuisine or goods it will help own country economic growth. Through patronizing local food business the economic income will increase and establishing more possible business will build. Additionally, food produce will make a sense of identity; locals will be familiar, enjoy and be proud what product they made.

On the one hand, the minor flaws in this scenario that local will not be able to experience the foods or goods that other countries offer.

In conclusion, supporting foods and goods that manufactured in own land are more beneficial for the citizen by creating job and help economy.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, well, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18374558304 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64369053156 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544169611307 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.623744631 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.785714286 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176748949104 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699723374352 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635323803504 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110663267912 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550741729886 0.056905535591 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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