The graph shows the demand for electercity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
The first linear representation reveals the information about daily demand of electrcity in England during winter and summer season, and the second circular representation depicts the use of power for several purposes. It is clear and coherent representation.
It is lucid, in line graph initially 18,000 units of electricity demand in summer but after 9 hrs it is declined around 13,000 units. While this proportion are increase due to 12-15 hrs, it become 20,000 units at 14 hrs. At the end of day demand of power again decrease, it is same from initial ratio. However, in the winter electricity demand near about 35-40,000 units at o-3 hrs. Afterthat, moving next year it reduce 30,000 units at 6-9 hrs respectively. A few hrs later the demand of power rising and it reach to peak level it become more than 40,000 units at 21 hrs but after next 3 hrs it is decline required as 35,000 units.
Moving ahed, in the circular charts the highly percentage of electricity uses for heating room and water, it is more than half(52.5%). While ovens, kettles and washing machine are used less than one fifth(17.5%). A minimum quantity of power are being used on lighting , TV, radio, vacum cleaner, food mixer, and other electronic gadgets, respectively 15%.
Overall, it is clearly seen that a line graph showing a zig- zag trend in typical days in winter and summer whereas the electricity highly using in heating room and water, and massive uses in TV, radio, food mixer and other electronic tools.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...rtion are increase due to 12-15 hrs, it become 20,000 units at 14 hrs. At the end of d...
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Line 2, column 414, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reduces'?
Suggestion: reduces
...o-3 hrs. Afterthat, moving next year it reduce 30,000 units at 6-9 hrs respectively. A...
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Line 2, column 509, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reaches'?
Suggestion: reaches
...later the demand of power rising and it reach to peak level it become more than 40,00...
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Line 2, column 532, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...er rising and it reach to peak level it become more than 40,000 units at 21 hrs but af...
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Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tity of power are being used on lighting , TV, radio, vacum cleaner, food mixer, a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 254.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87401574803 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64037209173 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 106.607317073 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570866141732 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5503405159 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.166666667 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208861229919 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741176215036 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732887534938 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142986093129 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642675289933 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.