The graph shows the demand for electricty in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie charts shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
The given line chart depicts the information about the electricity, which is comsumed by England's people during normal days in winter and summer while the circular chart illustrate how british home comsumed in an average british home. The data is calibrated in percentum.
It can be seen that the comsumption of electricity in winter is about 33,000 units at mid-night but it reached 33,000 units at 7am and then the electricty used increase near about 40,000 at 13 pm. The electricity further more comsumed cross 40,000 units at 21 pm. it reached at peak point. However the comsumption of electricity in summer is about 18,000 units at mid-night but it is slowly decrease 12,000 then it increase is about 20,000 at 13 pm . It also boom and decline in zig-zag position
As far as trend is concerned the maximum electricity is used for heating rooms, heating water is (52.5%) whereas the vaccum cleaner, food mixer, electric tool is used (30%) electricity
Overall, it is evident that the electricity is more demand in winter then summer season and most of electricity is comsumed for heating rooms and water.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...its at 21 pm. it reached at peak point. However the comsumption of electricity in summe...
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Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'decreased'.
Suggestion: decreased
...000 units at mid-night but it is slowly decrease 12,000 then it increase is about 20,000...
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Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...ut it is slowly decrease 12,000 then it increase is about 20,000 at 13 pm . It also boom...
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Line 3, column 449, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hen it increase is about 20,000 at 13 pm . It also boom and decline in zig-zag pos...
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Line 3, column 460, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'booms'?
Suggestion: booms
...ease is about 20,000 at 13 pm . It also boom and decline in zig-zag position As ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lso boom and decline in zig-zag position As far as trend is concerned the maximum...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r, electric tool is used 30% electricity Overall, it is evident that the electric...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95187165775 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65218121324 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534759358289 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 119.668419444 43.030603864 278% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.285714286 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216747026211 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08338060894 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944558406216 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155107665692 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733367785132 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.