The graph shows the impact of vaccination on the incidence of whooping cough, a childhood illness, between 1940 and 1990 in Britain.
Summarise the information ny selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the rate of children were vaccinated in the UK and the effect of inoculations on the occurrences of whooping cough, a childhood illness over the period from 1940 to 1990. The general overview is that there was a correlation between the administration of vaccinations and the number of reported cases of whooping cough.
To specify, the number of incidences surged from 50000 in 1940 to 170000 in 1942, before a considerable drop to 60000 in the mid 1940s. After a sharp increase to the peak of 170000 again in 1950, the figure fluctuated to 90000 until the introduction ...
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