The graph shows the income of four cafés in New York over last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features. Make comparisons where relevant
The line graph illustrates the profit of four coffee shops ( The Tea Room, Wifi Café, Internet Express, Café Cool ) in New York over last year. It can be seen that three cafés’ income exhibited an upward trend whilst that of The Tea Room experienced a downward trend.
Café Cool started off at $30,000 in January. There was a gradual fluctuation in Café Cool ‘s earnings from January to September, followed by a modest rise for the next three months. Since then, it has grown steeply to $120,000 in December. Internet Express ‘s profit decreased moderately between January and July, after that it went up remarkably to $130,000 at the end of the year. After increasing for 7 months, Wifi Café ‘s income fell to about $60,000 in September, Thereafter, it rocketed dramatically and peaked at $190,000 in December, which was the highest one of four cafés’ earnings.
The Tea Room had the highest profit in January at nearly $160,000. Since then, it has fluctuated sharply over the following 10 months. In December, it reached its bottom at $50,000, which was also the lowest earnings in the last month of the year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85863874346 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47905620947 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581151832461 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.3607982463 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 5.23603664747 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155885535497 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634657364979 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076615392162 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12045946559 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737823933759 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.