The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

The graph gives information about the percentage of elderly people in USA, Sweden and Japan during a period of a century.

It is clear that the proportion of population over 65 is expected to increase to the end of the period, with figures eventually reaching to 25%.

In 1904, near 10% of Americans, 7% of Swedish and 5% of Japanese are over 65 or more. Over the half of the century, the western countries reached to 15% after some fluctuation, while Japan fell back to 5% after slightly decrease during this period.

From 1990 to 2040, it is expected that Sweden and the US have an upward trend and will arrive at maximum amount of 25%. However, a dramatic rise will be expected for figures in Japan, with the proportion of older population increasing to the highest level of 27% which will be almost 5 times more than the initial year of the period.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 708.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5974025974 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49211947354 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616883116883 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1109572173 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142734347111 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733493529495 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517304726557 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894989762707 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517300969563 0.0819641961636 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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