The line graph represents the percentage of old age people in Japan, Sweden and the USA for a century from 1940 until 2040.
Overall, it is clear that the number of older population is expected an upward trend meanwhile Japanese aged populace is expected to be on its highest and surpass the other two nations by 2030.
Moving on to the details,in the USA in 1940 there was almost 9% of older citizens which exhibited a steady growth and reached at 15% in 1980. Thereafter followed by a slight decline, it is expected to regain its growth by 2040, which would be around 24%. Similarly, for Sweden, the starting percentage was about 6% that increased slow and steady and is predicted to end at 25% in 2040.
However, in Japan,the rate of retirement age group was the least in the beginning at 5% and it dipped to 4% and remained constant until 1980. Thereafter from 2000, the figure started climbing up and is expected to be skyrocketing after 2020 and by 2040, more than quarter percentage of older people could be from Japan.
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 67
- The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summ 89
- Many governments think that economic progress is most important goal. some people, however, think that other types of progress and equally important for a country. 56
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
- The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billion) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , in
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Suggestion: Thereafter,
...eady growth and reached at 15% in 1980. Thereafter followed by a slight decline, it is exp...
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Suggestion: , the
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thereafter,
...to 4% and remained constant until 1980. Thereafter from 2000, the figure started climbing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, similarly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62841530055 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51994936927 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584699453552 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1436090121 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117939527223 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570962620429 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441971912078 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816449324429 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473304034891 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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