Contentment is an ultimate desire for each individual. Even though it is not easy to give proper definition to the feeling of happiness, having a few factors enable the people to enjoy this supreme emotion.
To embark on, happiness is difficult to define due to its subjective nature. It differs from person to person. For example, a poor person may get happy if the basic needs of food, shelter and clothing are provided to him, while these things would not make any impact on a wealthy person's life. Similarly, a sick person always search to regain his health which may not be a concern for a healthy person. Furthermore, feeling of happiness is of short span. Individuals demands changes according to their achievements so that their demands would never end. To be clearer, people may not feel the same enjoyment on the thing after the initial days.Thus it goes without saying that giving proper definition because of its depending nature on personal attitudes.
Moving on to the elements required to acquire joyfulness, the most important factor is good health and lifestyle. Undoubtedly people could enjoy a happy moment if they are healthy. Secondly, wealth is also essential because it helps the individual to fulfill their basic needs and to keep them up-to-date. Finally, good interpersonal relationships enhance the experience of happiness. To be clearer, people who have more social relationships seem to be happier than lonely individuals.
In conclusion, defining happiness precisely is difficult because it depends on many factors like personal desires and emotions. However, both health and wealth enable populace to achieve contentment and satisfaction to a great extent.
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 67
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summ 89
- The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 937.175257732 152% => OK
No of words: 271.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26199261993 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8493250198 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 127.690721649 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616236162362 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 290.88556701 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2975837518 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.125 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 4.34317383033 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178894660116 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580604055501 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696748426881 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102493194012 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554828599409 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 41.2886597938 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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