The graph shows the proportion of population aged 65 or more in Japan, Sweden and USA between 1940 and 2040.
The graph illustrates the differences in the ageing population of Japan, Sweden, and the USA from 1940 to 2040.
Generally, it can be seen from the line graph that the percentage of people aged 65 or over has grown tremendously in all three countries over the period given. More over, while the USA had the highest proportion of the elderly at the beginning, Japanese is expected to have the largest ageing population in 20140.
In 1940, the proportion of those aged 65 or more in the USA was just under 10%, which doubled that in Japan and was 2% higher than that in Sweden. Afterwards, Sweden and the USA experienced similar upward trends, climbing to 14% and 15 % respectively in 1990. Meanwhile, after a slight decrease in 1960, Japanese ageing population stabilized at merely 3% until 1990.
For the rest of the period, although remaining much lower than those of the other two nations during the 1990- 2020 period, the proportion of people aged 65 or over in Japan is predicted to witness a dramatic surge to 27% in 2040. As for Sweden and the USA, the prediction is that figures will be around 25% at the end.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66161616162 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57533643797 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570707070707 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0795377826 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.375 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446238863621 0.215688989381 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194970625014 0.103423049105 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142738793984 0.0843802449381 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301203715765 0.15604864568 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128971653672 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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