The graph shows the spending on education, medical care and pension in a
particular country from 2001 to 2051. Summarise the information by selecting and
reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates spending portion on medical care, education and pension of government from 2001 to today and it also predict percentage till 2051.
Overall, It can be seen that education cost was at top level in given period of time. Another two shows changing trend. Pension will go to up direction and in controversial, medical care will take opposite track.
It is manifest that in 2001, spending on education was highest, with around 15% followed by medical care and pension expenditure with 10% and 6% respectively. After 2001, cost of education was declined minimal up to 14% by 2021. It is expected that it will remain same till 2051. Approximately 11% was spent on medical care in 2001. There was no change in it’s cost up to 2011 but rose gradually and it will show extreme fall in future. Expense of pension was remained same between 2001 and 2021. Considerably increment will be seen in spending amount for pension till 2051.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'predicts'?
Suggestion: predicts
...vernment from 2001 to today and it also predict percentage till 2051. Overall, It can...
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Line 2, column 72, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ducation cost was at top level in given period of time. Another two shows changing trend. Pens...
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Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...gradually and it will show extreme fall in future. Expense of pension was remained same b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88414634146 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64177840835 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4452491872 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.8181818182 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216724948963 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890188091304 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661370463978 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166608776215 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666916357349 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.