Life in many cities around the world is becoming so expensive that one day only rich people will be able to live there.
What are the causes of this situation? What measures could be taken to solve the problem?
It is irrefutable fact that cost of basic requirement of living has been increasing in urban areas. It can be predicted that only affluent class of society will able to survive in metro cities in future. There are several reasons for such a situation. However, certain steps could be taken to overcome the obstacle. Both the causes and remedies are analysed in ensuing paragraph.
Discussing the reasons of being expensive city and only survival of wealthy family, many examples can be put forward. The foremost one is that increasing demand of products and services. What I mean by this, every individual have willingness to acquire good service and essential thing to live smooth life and earning capability of citizens is very high in contemporary times. Thus, Demand of product such as house, cars, shops are at high level. Furthermore, more and more people from countryside are interested to migrate to city which leads to increase high expense of accommodation in city. For example, the cost of rented apartments in a metro city like Mumbai is more than double than that of those in a place like Surat, a typical small town.
There are numerous remedies to tackle this situation. Firstly, population of mega city should be under control. For that, higher authorities need to think towards stopping migration to metro city. Government should give job opportunities to people in rural area which automatically reduces migration. It also helps to control population of city. What is more, price of all commodities should be under observation of civic bodies. Along with that high taxes should be taken from affluent family to serve equally to other poor people.
To conclude, it is seen that survival in mega cities is really tough task because of increasing living expense. Over population, heavy demand of product and services are primary reasons of it. Active work of government can easily handle this scenario.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, really, so, thus, for example, i mean, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10126582278 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68248986628 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601265822785 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0927011786 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7619047619 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0476190476 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246822784889 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604803790055 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591583303636 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135709514143 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540402142183 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.