To learn a foreign language successfully you need to spend time in the country where the language is spoken.
To what extent do you agree with this?
It is undeniable fact that having good linguistic ability plays an indispensable role in various part of persons’ life. It is often argued that if any individual want to learn non-native language, living in country where people speak that language is necessary. I completely disassociate myself with this point of view. I believe that person can learn new language of other country in any corner of the globe in contemporary times. Ideas enunciated further in my disclosure will support my point of view.
Discussing few points to prove my disagreement, the foremost one is that technology helps a lot to get vast knowledge and become expert in any language. Today mankind have great chance to learn from uploaded material on world wide web. For instance, books and local literatures of specific linguistic subject of different nations are easily available on websites. Apart from that some valuable tutorial by international trainer which provides beneficial steps and proper online training to train individual to put strong control on that language. As well as video course can be also chosen by learner.
Additionally, person can learn from various tuition class in their own countries. Different type of international academic organisation opens their branch to myriad state of the world. Trainers from universal educate their students in every branch. So, there is no need to move to that country where that language is spoken. Furthermore, school curriculum can be fulfilled by demanded language of the world. Thus, pupils can get chance to improve their ability in famous languages since their childhood.
However, I also perceive that leaning language in host nations could teach it within short period of time. Because of compulsion for using that language, people can step ahead toward become expert very quickly. What is more, individual learn better from local people of that country instead of internet.
To conclude, I tend to believe that it is not require to live in foreign country to learn that language. Today, individuals have great choice of internet to learn all the language and branches of international classes are available on their own country. However, it is irrefutable fact that acquiring knowledge of foreign language in foreign nation takes less time and less efforts to learn.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 93, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ost nations could teach it within short period of time. Because of compulsion for using that l...
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Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...quickly. What is more, individual learn better from local people of that country inste...
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Line 9, column 48, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...clude, I tend to believe that it is not require to live in foreign country to learn tha...
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Line 9, column 56, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'living'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: living
... tend to believe that it is not require to live in foreign country to learn that langua...
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Line 9, column 371, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun efforts is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...e in foreign nation takes less time and less efforts to learn.
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...time and less efforts to learn.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, apart from, for instance, in short, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31266846361 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77360717093 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574123989218 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8535442822 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5909090909 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8636363636 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219940599407 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659618754426 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075261922205 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125136444945 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648019410703 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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