The graph shows student enrolments at the University of Westchester.
Write a summary of the information. Select and report the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph give us a comparison on the number of enrolled students at the University of Westchester between the year 1875 up to 2024 and divided into 4 categories (men students, women, students age more than 25 and international students). Overall, male students has the highest number followed by the females.
The number of male students increased steadily from its initial number of roughly about 1000 enrollees during the year 1875 to 1899 then surged up to its peak by 15,000 students after a hundred years (1975-1999). However, it was forecasted to decline about 1000 enrollees less from 15,00...
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The graph give us a comparison
The graph gives us a comparison
male students has the highest number
male students have the highest number
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 208 200
No. of Characters: 951 1000
No. of Different Words: 107 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.798 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.572 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.46 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 64 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 45 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 32 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.909 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.483 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.736 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.124 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Great grammar, you have attempted to use complex sentence structures and a wide range of vocabulary/synonyms. However the order of the ideas is not as organised as your ability should get you to.
I suggest putting your "overall' sentence (at the end of the first paragraph) down to be the closing paragraph of your essay. As currently it has no ending so I think giving it a proper closing sentence would be a safer choice.