The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London

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The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

The line chart collates the amount of people who utilize London Underground Station during 16 hours per a day.

At the first glance, it is clear that there are several declines and climbs in the graph and passengers used the metro various amounts in discrepant time.

The most of London Underground Station passengers use the underground at 8:00 a.m, wheres at 6:00a.m and 16:00 p.m, approximately a hundred people utilize that metro as the least number of passers-by. Besides, there is a dramatic increase at 18:00 p.m in the number of passengers who utilize the underground from just under four hundred to around three hundred and eighty people between at 16:00 p.m and 18:00 p.m, a rise of about two hundred and eighty passers-by in 2 hours.

There are also sudden decreases in line chart. Particularly, between 8:00 a.m and 10:00 a.m, from 14:00 p.m to 16:00 p.m, as well as, throughout the period from 18:00 p.m to 20:00 p.m, volume of passengers dropped suddenly to certain number of passengers.

It is interesting to note that people use the underground the most when they go to and come back from their work or study.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86597938144 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58355945673 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530927835052 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.1680199265 43.030603864 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.857142857 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225153724897 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109856024868 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877234319493 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118131954465 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616587116366 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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