The graphs below provide information on global population figures and figures for urban populations in different world regions.
The first curve graph shows information about global population figure and the bar chart presents urban population in developed and developing regions.
According to the data provided in the first graph, the world population was around 1,000 in the year of 1800, afterward, it experienced a slight increase and arrived at 2,000 in 1920. However, it started to climb dramatically since 1940 and this tendency is predicted to continue until the figure will hit its record high at 8,000 in 2040. Then the world population will decline sharply.
We could know from the second graph that urban population in developed regions will remain stable, between 1,000 to 1,500 from 2015 to 2040. On the other hand, the situation in developing countries will be totally different: urban population will be about 2,100 in 2015, then it will witness a gradual rise and reach at 4,000 in 2040 which will be almost two times as much as in 2015.
To sum up, we predict that world population will see a fluctuation in the future and urban population in developing regions will ascend by definition.
- The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. 78
- The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010 85
- The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000. 78
- The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton 67
- The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, then, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97802197802 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60240105384 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587912087912 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0124702155 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.428571429 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 5.23603664747 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299553187174 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163153260718 0.103423049105 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11091646203 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220383452537 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115032444075 0.0819641961636 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.