The graphs below show the age structure of a European country from 1901 to 1981 and a prediction for 2021.
The pie charts provide information regarding the population by age group in Europe over 80 year period and the projection for year 2021.
Overall, it can be noticeably seen that the number of elder people, ages 65 and above, increased substantially over time as the population inflate as well. The same trend is also foreseen in the near future.
To begin with, there is a significant increase in population between 1901 and 1941 with the data showing 38,225,000 and 52,335,000 respectively. Despite of these rise in figure, the percentage of human population below 65 remained the same at 95%, between 65-85 at 4% and, 85 and above at only 1%. The data changed eventually in year 1981 ,with a population that slighty climbed up to 67,180,000, Europeans below the age of 65 dropped to 83%, those with the age ranging from 65-85 at 13% and finally, those who's age is morethan 85 is at 4%.
It is estimated in the future, in year 2021, that the population will continue to rise reaching 87,658,000. The number of people, as projected, will consist of 79% at the age ranging from 0-65, 15% for 65-85 years old and lastly, 6% for 85 years old and older.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: who's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, lastly, regarding, so, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70935960591 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65427203539 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8922276011 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.375 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169834713213 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681213921011 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507056024313 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954117821312 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395039746221 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.