The graphs below show the enrollments of overseas students and local students in Australia universities over 10 year period

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The graphs below show the enrollments of overseas students and local students in Australia universities over 10 year period.

The graphs illustrate the number of overseas students and local students who enrolled in Australia universities for over a decade.

Overall, what stands out from the line graphs are that the total enrollments for overseas students have been increasing dramatically from 2001 to 2010, while for local students fluctuated among 600000 enrollments since 2007 to 2010. In the other hand, the commencing of the overseas students is not as high as the local students.

A closer look at the line graphs reveal that the international students have gone to Australia higher day by day. It means both of the tourism and the education have been increasing and shown how much attractive this country is.

With the gap of more than 60000 total enrollments over 10 years, foreign students are interested in the culture, weather and history of Australia.

As can be seen from the graphs, the number of the enrollments for local students hit a peak in 2006 with over 600000 total enrollments and fluctuated then. For the commencing of the local students, it stayed table among 190000 to 210000 for a decade.

To conclude, the enrollments for overseas students has gone up pronounced for both line graphs, whereas local students were volatile generally.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, then, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13725490196 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72397334007 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519607843137 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6356866261 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.444444444 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418623446786 0.215688989381 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201598906037 0.103423049105 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141130275521 0.0843802449381 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256520865632 0.15604864568 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133658054239 0.0819641961636 163% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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