The graphs below show information about citizenship in the UK.
While the line graph illustrates the number of immigrants who obtained uk citizenship from 1962 to 2002, the bar chart demonstrates the distribution of those people by continents in 1996 and 2002.
Generally, the number of people who became uk citizens during the period of 40 years rose dramatically by 100 thousand, mostly contributed from Asia.
Initially, there are 20 thousand people who gained uk citizenship in 1962 before increasing to 39 thousand in the next ten years. The figure was later decrease slightly to 30 thousand in 1982, and begin to climb up again to 50 thousand in 1992. In the preceded ten years, it soared into 119 thousand people who was given uk citizenship by the government.
Specifically, the distributions of newly uk citizens are, in 1996, 49 thousand immigrants from Asia was recorded to move to the uk. The number rose modestly by nearly 10 thousand over six years. there was 9 thousand people immigrated from each continents, Europe and Africa in 1996. These figures, however, tripled to 27 and 25 thousand after six years respectively. In contrast to such increasing, the immigrations number of America, Australasia and others to uk decreased slightly by one thousand in the same period.
- Newspapers have an enormous influence on people’s ideas and opinions. Why? Is this a positive or negative situation? 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 196, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13300492611 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95862741527 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0768121607 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.2 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119746486937 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548215837293 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512903609016 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844184137667 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034882030061 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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