The pie charts show the amount of household energy consumed and the emission of greenhouse gases in Australia.
Overall, it is obvious from the diagrams that there are 7 types of energy usages and gas emissions which consists of cooking, stand by, lighting, refrigeration, heating and cooling, water heating and other appliances.
There are 3 main household energy consumed which are heating and cooling, water heating and other appliances. The most energy usage is other appliances by 24%. Water heating and heating and cooling consumed less than other appliances by 1% and 4% respectively. Cooking used household energy the same as stand by at 5%. For refrigeration, it consumed by 12% which is more energy usage than lighting by 1%.
Moving on to greenhouse gases emission, the three main of emission are not differences from the usage of household energy. The highest emission is not other appliances but it is heating and cooling at 38%. Other appliances is the third of emission at 16% and 23% for water heating. There are a slight differences in cooking and stand by at 1%. Both lighting and refrigeration have the same emission rate by 7%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02604166667 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7939152558 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453125 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0899414661 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4166666667 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 5.23603664747 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133542331016 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665989046687 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955900258461 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126575067945 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124975420864 0.0819641961636 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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