The line graph illustrates the profits of three kind of exports from South East Asia between 1970 and 1995, while the pie charts give information about four sector that producing money for South East Asia in 1970 and 1995.
In 1979, other raw materials were the highest exports that make profit from South East Asia, which stood at 30 millions of US dollar, and then followed by manufactured products (about 22 millions of US dollar) and timber (just under 15 millions of US dollar). Between 1979 and 1975, there was a considerably increase in the amount of manufactured products selling before it levelled off. Although there was a gradually rising from 1980 to 1985, it dropped to the same level as in 1980 (roughly 35 millions of US dollars). Finally, it went up at the end of the period given, which was around 37 millions of US dollar.
Other raw materials and timber have similar trends. There was a rising profit in the number of other raw materials selling from 30 to around 35 between 1970 and 1975. However, the products decreased gradually from 1975 yon1995 and reached their lowest point at just around 20 millions of US dollar. In addition, between 1970 and 1985, the product of timber went up considerably and reached its highest point at roughly 26 millions of US dollar. Similar to previous product I mentioned, this product went down and dropped to just around 5 millions of US dollar.
Next to the pie charts. In 1970, domestic sector had the largest proportion of revenue for South East Asia, which was 33%, and followed by exports (29%), tourism (27%) and other sector (11%), while in 1995, tourism sector was the highest proportion than any other sector, which was almost half of total revenue.
To sum up, there was a correlation between selling products overseas and revenue for South East Asia between 1970 and 1995. Selling other raw materials increased the revenue from domestic sector and in 1995, manufactured products were the most popular by increasing number of tourist.
- Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things.Do you agree or disagree? 73
- The graphs below show three exports from South East Asia and the four sources of revenue for 1970 and 1995.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kind' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kinds'.
Suggestion: kinds
... graph illustrates the profits of three kind of exports from South East Asia between...
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Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'sector' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sectors'.
Suggestion: sectors
... pie charts give information about four sector that producing money for South East Asi...
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Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '30 million'.
Suggestion: 30 million
...it from South East Asia, which stood at 30 millions of US dollar, and then followed by manufac...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '22 million'.
Suggestion: 22 million
...followed by manufactured products about 22 millions of US dollar and timber just under 15 mill...
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Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '15 million'.
Suggestion: 15 million
...ions of US dollar and timber just under 15 millions of US dollar. Between 1979 and 1975, there...
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Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('considerably') instead an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
...ollar. Between 1979 and 1975, there was a considerably increase in the amount of manufactured products ...
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Line 3, column 490, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '35 million'.
Suggestion: 35 million
...ed to the same level as in 1980 roughly 35 millions of US dollars. Finally, it went up at the ...
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Line 3, column 586, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '37 million'.
Suggestion: 37 million
...d of the period given, which was around 37 millions of US dollar. Other raw materials and t...
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Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '20 million'.
Suggestion: 20 million
...ached their lowest point at just around 20 millions of US dollar. In addition, between 1970 an...
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Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '26 million'.
Suggestion: 26 million
...nd reached its highest point at roughly 26 millions of US dollar. Similar to previous product ...
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Line 5, column 537, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
...ct went down and dropped to just around 5 millions of US dollar. Next to the pie charts. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, so, then, while, in addition, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 33.7804878049 192% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 965.302439024 172% => OK
No of words: 342.0 196.424390244 174% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85380116959 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41054163789 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.426900584795 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 283.868780488 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6043075937 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.571428571 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186591867327 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708324343112 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106490151298 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155835977431 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128722789811 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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