The graphs below show three exports from South East Asia and the four sources of revenue for 1970 and 1995.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The graph and charts present the amount of three different commodities (manufactured products, timber, and other raw materials) exported from South East Asia countries as well as the four major revenues (domestic, tourism, exports, and others) for the countries in 25 years (from 1970 to 1995). In general, it is vividly apparent that manufactured products were the only goods which experienced a rise in number during the given period. Meanwhile, the sources of revenue showed a considerable change over the years.
As regard to the line graph, all exported items witnessed a fluctuation. In the first year, raw materials placed as the highest commodities sent with the total of 30 millions dollars, followed by manufactured products and timber, which accounted for about 22 and 15 millions dollars respectively. Five years later, all commodities rose in amount. However, starting from 1975, raw materials dropped moderately until hiring only 20 million US dollars in 1995. Similar to the decline received by the raw materials, the amount of timber reduced noticeably, despite the slight incline in 1980; becoming the least exported commodity in 1995. In contrast, the number of manufactured products tended to climb up until reaching its peak in 1985 with above 40 million dollars. Inspire of the fact that the products decreased in 1990, it still remained as the most exported items in the end of the period.
Turning to the chart, the sources of revenue changed over the years. In 1970, the biggest revenue was domestic with 33% followed by exports and tourism, and other as the least revenue with only 11% of the total percentage. Meanwhile, 25 years later, tourism became the biggest revenue with more than half of the portion. In contrast, exports dropped the figure by 16%, sitting as the least revenue for the SEA countries in the end of the time frame.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, still, well, while, in contrast, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 965.302439024 161% => OK
No of words: 306.0 196.424390244 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08823529412 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64316868997 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 106.607317073 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519607843137 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 283.868780488 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3443776821 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.214285714 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204761021979 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669778227176 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686856455098 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155682093073 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759752544898 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 40.7170731707 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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