Given is a line graph illustrating three types of export products from South East Asia from 1970 to 1995, while the pie chart compares three main srouces of South East Asia's revenue during 25 years period. Overall, it is immediately apparent that the exports of manufactured products had an upward trend while the two remainings saw in contrast. In addition, the biggest revenue which firstly came from domestic had replaced by tourism at the end of the period.
To begin with, in 1970, three items had an increase in terms of its exports with other raw materials stood at the highest figure at 30 million dollars. In the following 5 years, however, exports I'm raw materials decreased before levelling off at below 35 million dollars during 1980's, and declined to the lowest point at 20 million dollars in 1995. Differently, the products of manufactured took over other raw materials in the middle of 1975's and reached a peak of over 45 million dollars in 1985 before falling down to 35 million dollars. Timber, on the other hand, increased until the year of 1980 then consistently dropped to 5 million dollars.
Turning to the second chart, it is shown that in 1970, domestic was the main source of revenue at 33%, and exports came the second at 29%, just slightly higher than toursime. In 1995, in contrast, tourism made up the largest percentage at 54% while domestic and exports saw a decrease by 12% and 5% respectively. Other sources only accounted for lower number at 11% in 1970 and 13% in 1995.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...the following 5 years, however, exports Im raw materials decreased before levellin...
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Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'during the 1980s'.
Suggestion: during the 1980s
...velling off at below 35 million dollars during 1980s, and declined to the lowest point at 20...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, so, then, while, in addition, in contrast, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 33.7804878049 169% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 261.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78544061303 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52975133439 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55938697318 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1068572691 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.9 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 5.23603664747 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216177012763 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082657992859 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858196649639 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148403474459 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717280965823 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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