The graphs illustrate the three types of export commodities from South East Asia and the four kinds of revenue between 1970 and 1995.
Overall, it can be seen in the line graph that manufactured products increased while the two others declined, timber and other raw materials. Otherwise, in the two pie charts can be observed, the sources of revenue from tourism and other climbed up, on the other hand, domestic and exports walked down.
In terms of exports, all commodities showed a rise from 1979 to 1975. In the middle of period, manufactured products reached the peak by considerably over 40 million dollars, while timber went down and raw material remained stable. In the end of period, manufactured products showed rise trend, however, raw materials remained steady, at twenty millions and timber dipped, at approximately 5 million dollars.
Turning to pie charts, source of revenue from domestic and exports decreased significantly from 33% and 29% in 1979 to 21% and 12% in the year 1995. Different from the two initial products and services sectors, Tourism and other sectors supply climbed up from 27% and 11% in the former period to 54% and 13% in the next period.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... down and raw material remained stable. In the end of period, manufactured product...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02030456853 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61746877272 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578680203046 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5413198872 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.625 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180384751987 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093683464831 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110313442902 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146049202135 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127643215386 0.0819641961636 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.