The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of tickets sales in 1996 and 2000 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The bar charts illustrate how many genres of films were produced and tickets were sold between 1996 and 2000 in a country.
Overall, there was an increase in the number of films released over the period, while romance movies remained the same. In addition, people bought more tickets throughout the years examined to watch drama, comedy and fantasy ones but romance choices decreased.
The proportion of drama movies started at north of 25%, after which it saw a significant rise to exactly 35% in 2000. Similar changes can also be seen in the shares for comedy and fantasy films, which grew from 20% to 25% and from over 10% to about 16% respectively throughout the years given. Meanwhile, romance movies stayed stable at around 6% from 1996 to 2000.
Precisely 23% of viewers spent their money on comedy at the beginning of the period, with a subsequent marginal growth to approximately 24% in 2000. Similarly, but to lesser extent, the figure for drama and fantasy fans went up remarkably by just 1% and doubling that compared to the previous year of the period recorded in that order. Conversely, romance was the least favourite genre among them, with a downturn from 5% to just nearly 3% over the years covered.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, if, similarly, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84688995215 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46151672386 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1332103886 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.555555556 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0700277791962 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324075161115 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321713254931 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0504292488012 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316638248453 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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